Wednesday, December 5, 2007

My attempt at poetry:

The Death of An Angel

Once in a cold evening,
I was walking all alone.
Blinded by mist and the veil of fog,
I somehow perceived a small outstretched hand
and a full voice spoke crying for help at a distance.

I sat beside the frail stranger.
Who was a minor lass covered in tattered rags.

There were drops of perspiration,
like dewdrops on her small forehead
and her swollen body was burningwith fever like hot embers in a
freshly doused fire.

With a sweet smile on her bereft face.
She asked me for some water to drink.
I went to fetch a cup of life to quench
her insatiable thirst.

But by the time I reached her.
She was gone, dead and lifeless.

My eyes shimmered with tears.
To perceive an innocent child
Die in such agony.

But than I thought why was I mourning?
As she was only a stranger of sorts.
I consoled myself by saying that,
She was gone, gone for good.

As she now could curtail the
Afflications of her weary life.
I ran, ran away from the corpse.

Than I saw a star shining in the distant sky.
And I felt that it has winked at me.
Yes, the little angel has become a star.
Which would stay eternal forever!!!!

2 comments:

alok said...

HI!! i just touched the feelings of ur untitled verses and its very vivid in its presentation....I think you are represented better in verse then in prose as your writting appear inclined more towards feelings, imagination, trauma and injustice around the society....a cry of heart is best described by melody of verse......I am sorry if i am giving an unsolicited advise as ur profile say u are a writter.....but i like the way u write..awaiting more and better verse form u...keep the flame burning..best wishes

Mofi said...

hey Alok thanks for your comments! will try to write more poems!! its coming soon!! Check out this space!!